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Massacre at a High School by ~ebnielsen:iconebnielsen:



I. A morose boy in black
Crying bullets of anguish
Enters purgatory
His high school
Sadistic treatment abound
But he endured

Filled with rage
He draws a gun
Firing upon classmate
That showed him such contempt
They did not understand
The darkness within him

He shoots those who alienated him
Forcing him behind a mask
Of bravado
Hiding the pain of his soul
His final act of retribution
For a lifetime of shame

Shots ring out like firecrackers
Mingling with the screams
Of his victims in agony
Over whelming the commons with their sound
The scent of gunpowder
Whiffs heavily in the air

The lonely teen
Stands over the bodies
Of his tormentors
Laughing
While crimson blood
Flows at his feet

His macabre task complete
The young gunman
Holds the weapon
To his temple
Depressing the trigger
Ends his silent suffering
©2006-2009 ~ebnielsen
:iconebnielsen:

Author's Comments

This is part one of a three piece poem written after the Columbine shooting.

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:icontornskirt666:
I like it..Very true....:hug:

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"my mind is busy trying to sort through your words"
:iconjaygrrl:
:glomp:

Very dark and beautifully written, very nice ^_^

My favourite of what I've seen so far of your work.

Keep on writing, hon, you're the best <3 :blowkiss:

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Those who can't hear the music, think the dancer mad.

'Can't rain all the time'

~Those who live in darkness wander aimlessly~
:icontoxikexposed:
acch. damn firefox. i thought you could set it to no comments somehow.. now ive realized.. firefox is just evil lol.. anyways. very good poem, i love this one! its very thought provoking, greatness.

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.:. ToXik .:.

Sleep tight, dont let the bed bugs hunp.. cuz then they'll multiply!
:iconaraleith:
I like this. It makes it seem almost...understandable.

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"Just dress like you're going to a Manson concert. I'll be joygasming before we even get in the door." -Diamond
:icondirty-sanchez5:
Columbine was cool. I wish it would happen again.

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:iconbluex-cmc:
I love this. I've read a lot of Columbine poems, but this is my favourite!
:iconebnielsen:
Dirty Sanchez- School shootings are NOT cool they are terrable events that should be stopped at all cost. I only wrote this poem from the point of veiw of the shooter to to try to exsplaine why it happened. I have a little simpathy for the shooters but that does not give them a reason to kill people

BlueX- Thank you so much. It seems to be a populer subject so if this one is your favorite I take it as a huge compliment.

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The question, O me! so sad, recrring - What good amid these, O me, O life?

Answer, That you are here - that life exists and identity, That the powerfull play goes on, and you may contribute a verse.

O me! O life! by Walt Whitman

-ebnielsen-

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